Jenny Matlock’s Saturday Centus - The
prompt this week is a picture prompt. And this is going to be a rhyming
week.
So...
Number of words: 100 words.
Style of writing: Poetry
Pictures: No additional
Pictures: No additional
Ok here goes my attempt…
A home this dog could not find
But most days he didn’t seem to mind
Today though, he felt so full of
grime
With the sun so bright
Even with all his might
There was no food in sight
Up and down the streets he roamed
He felt his mouth as it foamed
His mind raced with thoughts of
being homed
Just ahead his eyes hit the ground
There was a mound
Made just for a hound
This huge wet mountain of ice
Seemed really nice
Without hesitation he fell
He wanted to yell
“Oh Hell, this is just swell!”
I don't usually write poems, well because I am not much of a poet, but this was
my try for today. Have a great weekend!
Susan, a pretty good "try" if you ask me! Now that all the boxes are packed and there's nothing else to do except wait for the van, I plan to float around in my pool!!
ReplyDeleteI feel sorry for your little pooch, glad he found a little bit of happiness:@)
ReplyDeleteLOL, pretty good job.
ReplyDeleteLucky dog! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGood effort, I'd say!
ReplyDelete=)
Well I'd say you are an excellent poet. This was just perfect and I totally enjoy happy endings!
ReplyDeleteI had the hardest time with this one. I think you did just dandy!!!
ReplyDeleteSusan, welcome to SC and thanks for visiting me and commenting ! Your education goals are indeed to be applauded and your NAMI service also...Mucho Kudos !!!
ReplyDeleteYoda once said, "Do or do not, there is no TRY !"
You did "DO" your poem beautifully, focusing on the plight homeless animals that just want a nice home and love !
I loved it!
ReplyDeleteOh Hell this is swell!
I think I'd feel that way if I found a big pile of ice to jump in.
August monsoon in Phoenix.
Not pretty!