PROMPT: "Words can
be puzzling..."
WORD COUNT - Not to exceed 104 (including the prompt)
STYLE OF WRITING - Any
PICTURES - Any Additional
WORD COUNT - Not to exceed 104 (including the prompt)
STYLE OF WRITING - Any
PICTURES - Any Additional
My submission…
“Bye, Bye Auntie Edith!” the young girl
yelled toward the old Volkswagen as it rolled away. She then turned to her
mother behind her and asked. “Auntie Edith was your auntie too when you were a little
girl?”
“Yes, Honey. Auntie Edith is Grannie’s sister.” Her mother
placed a hand on the little girl’s shoulder and slowly guided her toward the
house.
“Mommy, are you sure she is Grannie’s
sister, really?”
With a smile on her face the mother
responded, “Oh yes, they are sisters.”
“I don’t think they went to the same
school, because Auntie Edith’s words can be puzzling. What is gnarly?”
Susan, GREAT take on the prompt! This one kind of threw me, and I don't usually read others' offerings first, but I'm glad I read yours. Now I had better write my own.
ReplyDeletegreat take on the prompt. the prompt fits so well in the story.
ReplyDeletehope you have a great day.
Cool aunt! And I love the pic, too.
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lol. i didn't expect that. great job!
ReplyDeleteLove this story! My husband had that yellow VW, and growing up in the 60's in California...everything was gnarly! Great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletethat goes so well with the photo! Love it!!
ReplyDeleteAha, a cool auntie!!! I love your story, Susan. Keep up the great work! Mine is here
ReplyDeleteHave you an AWESOME WEEKEND!
hugs
shakira
Who doesn't want a cool aunt like her!
ReplyDelete~Naila Moon
http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/09/words-are-puzzzlinga-story-104-words.html
Oh this photo just rocks! I enjoyed your cute story too! Gnarly and all!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, love the picture too.
ReplyDeleteThis made me laugh so hard!
ReplyDeleteTonight my Grandlittles and I were dancing and rapping to 'Airplanes'.
When we finished our third round, the middle one said, "Are you sure you're a Grandma? You don't act like our other Grandma's. Oh. Wait! Yeah. You have gray hair."
Hmmm...
Thanks for sharing this cute writing.